Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Journal #2

Claim: We need to help stop the murder of people in Darfur

Data: A Genocide is occurring in Darfur

Warrent: Genocide is murder

Backing: Murder is illegal and it is the intentional killing of another person

Grounds: Innocent adults and children are being killed and enslaved everday

Qualifiers: We should help Darfur keep its children safe. We should provide medical attention and means of defense to the people of Darfur.

Rebuttal: Unless helping Darfur will cause our country to be in a second war. Unless the people of Darfur refuse our help.

1 comment:

  1. There's good content here in regards to the various reasons someone might support interventionin Darfur, but the Toulmin models asks you to look at one claim at a time. so, for the claim you state above, Toulmin would probably put it this way:

    Claim: We need to intervene in Darfur

    (because)

    Data: genocide is occurring

    Warrant: we should work to prevent genocide

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